Editing can mean walking tightrope

By Jeremy Boyer

Friday, April 6, 2007 7:35 PM EDT

Language can be a tricky thing for a newspaper.
An incident involving a recent story published by a former employer of mine, the Albany-based Times-Union newspaper, reminded me of this reality.

Here are the facts of that case:

The newspaper published a story about a reported rape in a popular downtown area, and as part of the coverage, included reaction from people at the bars and restaurants there. That reaction included this quote: “That's the thing with Albany, there's always a ghetto nearby.”

That sentence apparently drew complaints from offended readers, and it prompted an apology from the paper's managing editor, Mary Fran Gleason. “The reporter exercised utterly poor judgment by including the quote. ... Ditto for the night city editor who failed to delete the quote and for the copy editors who also failed to red-line it,” she wrote in an editor's blog.

I was struck by the tone Gleason took in this apology; she certainly didn't hold back in expressing her view that people really screwed up on this one.

But I was also struck by many of the reader comments posted online below her apology.

“It's a quote. It expresses other people's opinions, not the opinion of the Times Union editorial board,” one reader wrote. “Ghetto doesn't automatically mean black people. Albany has a student ghetto. It means a bad neighborhood.

“And yeah, Albany has a lot of work cut out to clean up its neighborhoods.”

So the controversy really boils down to the word ghetto. Taken literally, the word does mean an area populated by members of a minority group. You can look it up.

But many people now use that word to refer to a bad neighborhood in terms of its crime rate and property conditions - they're not thinking about race.

My guess is that person in the quote was not trying to say Albany has a problem because it has minority-populated areas. But the bottom line is that is how some people would read into a quote like that.

Newspapers do need to be mindful of how certain words can convey different meanings to different people.

I'm curious to hear what readers of The Citizen think. If we had included a similar quote in a crime story, what would the reaction have been? And if we had issued a similar apology, would we be accused of being too politically correct?

With the luxury of hindsight, I can say that I would have paraphrased that patron's comments rather than quote directly. The person was making a point that Albany has too many high-crime areas, which makes the “safer” areas vulnerable, as well.

To be honest, though, I don't know if I would have been sharp enough to spot the inflammatory nature of that direct quote ahead of time.

Executive editor Jeremy Boyer's column appears Saturdays in The Citizen and he can be reached at 253-5311 ext. 231 or jeremy.boyer@lee.net

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Joe wrote on Apr 13, 2007 7:51 AM:

" I read The Citizen everyday and have for most of my life. I barely read the opinion page anymore because there are so few letters to the editor published. Why is that? I think the paid columnists are pretty boring. Your newest columnist, Carole, seems to be off to a good start. Guy and Judy are just terrible. Maybe you could run a survivor/American Idol style contest to choose a new columnist. Might actually spur some interest in the paper again. Give it a though. "

AuburnGuy wrote on Apr 12, 2007 7:43 AM:

" Judy's weekly column is the worst. Perhaps the paper would be better served if you went to the college and had a weekly local op-ed competition. Anything has to e better than the rhetoric which she spews as if she were a farmer fertilizing her land for the spring planting. Either that, perhaps you should call her column something catchy, like "The Rants of a Loon" or "The Village Idiot". "

Dave wrote on Apr 11, 2007 5:06 PM:

" I love reading Judy's weekly column. Then the reactions of thin skinned people from them. The rants of the Wiccains are the best I must say. The saying "I may not agree with what you say. But, I'll defend your right to say so." Fits well I do belive. The only thing I see that is really lacking in the paper. Better coverage of the "Good Ole boys and gals" That run the city and county goverments. It would nice to have a reportor "write" a story on the meetings. Other than just writing a story from provided minutes. Last, mobody drives 30 mph on Grant Ave. Its not going to change a bit. Try driving in a larger city. Then you will see speeding. Try driving 55 mph on I 675 in Detroit. Going 70mph I have been passed. In this case, 55 will get you in an accident. Even 690 in Syracuse is the same. Drive with the flow of traffic. Or stay off the highway when its busy. "

Well..... wrote on Apr 11, 2007 3:39 PM:

" Instead of commenting on Albany's newspaper reporting, I think you should take a closer look at your favorite home-girl Judy who never ceases to offend many on a weekly basis. I don't believe you've yet to apologize to any of those she's offended with her rants. Look a little closer to home Mr. Boyer. "

Paul wrote on Apr 8, 2007 1:50 PM:

" I believe that it's important for people to understand that it was a quote from a bar/restaurant patron and not necessarily the view of the local newspaper. If people who choose to complain are too ignorant to know the difference, perhaps they shouldn't be reading the news in the first place. "

You stink!! wrote on Apr 8, 2007 1:50 AM:

" You are a very poor writer. Further, since you have became editor, the quality of the local paper has gone way down hill. Your coverage of all local politics is laughable. You do not even fully cover City Hall and the County Legislature, much less the donut towns. You have helped run a proud Auburn tradition into the ground. I hope you are as proud as the Osborne family would be ashamed. Happy Easter!!! "

I think you are a moron wrote on Apr 7, 2007 12:09 PM:

" Paraphrase? SO that is like censor, just a little different? Oh, when you edit letters to the editor, how come you toss out the basic rules of English? I really think you are a moron, and I hope that no morons are offended by that statement. "

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